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In-Class Writing Prompt: Revising a System-Centered Email into a User-Centered Email
Groups 1 & 2: With a partner, please revise the Warning email from Computer Infrastructure Support Services. Include all of the information you believe is important for readers to get from this email, but revise it in a way that is more responsive to the needs of its intended audience.
When you have finished revising this email in Word, please save it to the desktop and email it to me as an attachment, ostergaa@oakland.edu. We will discuss these in class.
Group 3: Please revise the Help Desk response email. Include all of the information you believe is important for readers to get from this email, but revise it in a way that is more responsive to the needs of its intended audience.
When you have finished revising this email in Word, please save it to the desktop and email it to me as an attachment, ostergaa@oakland.edu. We will discuss these in class.
These course materials
are licensed by Lori Ostergaard under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike 3.0 License.